Murda sharir review
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Murda sharir review
by AMAN KUMAR Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:28 am
Yha aap 'murda sharir' story par review de sakte hai.
Story link
https://icufc.forumotion.com/t39-murda-sharir
Story link
https://icufc.forumotion.com/t39-murda-sharir
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Re: Murda sharir review
by Shubham Kulshreshtha Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:45 pm
aapne bahut hee achhi kahani likhi hai aman bha khas tour se aapka idea bahut achha hai.
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Re: Murda sharir review
by AMAN KUMAR Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:29 pm
maine story complete kar di hai.Shubham Kulshreshtha wrote:aapne bahut hee achhi kahani likhi hai aman bha khas tour se aapka idea bahut achha hai.
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Re: Murda sharir review
by Shubham Kulshreshtha Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:41 pm
Maine aapki poori story parh li aman bhai
Aur kafi achhi story likhi hai aapne lekin bura mat maaniyega aisa lag rha hai jaise aapne ending me thodi jaldbaazi kar di..
Aur kafi achhi story likhi hai aapne lekin bura mat maaniyega aisa lag rha hai jaise aapne ending me thodi jaldbaazi kar di..
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Re: Murda sharir review
by AMAN KUMAR Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:45 pm
Ha aisa aap kah sakte hai 3 part k hisab se par maine ise purani general story k hisab se bnaya hai
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